Double Teamed on a Blind Date by Debbie Brownstone

This was not as good as another I read by this author, Bent Over in an Alleyway etc… Brenda goes on a blind date, only to wind up having a threesome with one of her date’s roommates.  There was nothing technically wrong with this short story.  The writing is tight, it’s well edited, but the characters struck me as very two-dimensional and the situation was unappealing.  The sex felt very mechanical and not as descriptive as in Ms. Brownstone’s other books.  That may be more my issue than the author’s, though, which is why I’m giving this three stars.  For erotica, I just didn’t find it arousing.  And for crying out loud, Ms. Brownstone, would you please, please, please pick some better titles for your stories?

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Posted on May 17, 2012, in 3 Star Reviews. Bookmark the permalink. Leave a comment.

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